A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
explain what you are currently doing
describe your suitability for this area of work
say when you can attend an interview
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is in response to your advertisement about your need for a waiter to work in your renown restaurant.
I passed out Bachelors in Culinary arts in the year 2008. Since then, I am a kitchen assistant cum floor waiter in the Hilton hotel located near Heathrow airport. My last job roles include: cleaning cutlery, waiting at the table to welcome guests, serving breakfast or main courses of the day to the guests, settling bills, dressing the tables once they leave and finally, taking telephone and online orders.
I can guarantee that I will easily fit into your organisation as I already have hands on experience in this area. To elaborate my strengths: positive attitude with customers which aids in conflict resolution, fluent in 3 languages namely English, French and Spanish and this will help me to cope up with multilingual customers, and I am scrupulous, meaning, I can honestly account for all monetary transactions. Finally, from the above one can understand that I am good at multi-tasking.
I am available immediately for an interview from the 1st of October as I am currently serving my notice period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, honestly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10256410256 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91651986106 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0033466527 44.8134815571 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.555555556 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206091983779 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742567580104 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110062604692 0.0603063233224 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155349767596 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147404444251 0.0580467560999 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.