The system used for rubbish garbage collection in your local area is not working properly This is causing problems for you and your neighbours Write a letter to the local council In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working pro

Essay topics:

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:

Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
Suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Sir

I am writing to express my concerns about the poor performance of the rubbish collection system in your community. Earlier they used to come and collect the garbage from homes every day. Now, they come only once a week. Consequently, garbage is piling up in homes and causing stench. We contacted the concerned authorities and they told us to dump the garbage in the garbage bins placed in various parts of the town. This arrangement causes a great deal of difficult to most people. Yet, many people now carry their garbage to the bin. Unfortunately, that does not resolve the issue because the garbage does not get collected from the bins. As a result, they are now overflowing and have become the haven of mosquitoes and fleas. We are quite worried about the health impacts of this.

I request you to look into this issue at the earliest. It is time the council hired more people to collect and dispose of garbage. It could also seek the help of locals willing to volunteer. If money is the problem, you could increase the fee charged for collecting garbage from homes. I am sure most residents would not mind paying a higher fee because everyone wants to live in clean surroundings.

Thank you for your consideration.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, so, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57701138032 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4924017709 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2352941176 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2352941176 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275735169147 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785431726086 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739167351707 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150721286456 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757079182444 0.0580467560999 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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