The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table shows information on the underground railway systems, the year the railway systems was initiated and the number of people travelling per year for six cities.
Generally, London has the longest route and it becomes one of the oldest underground railway systems. On the other hand, Los Angles still gains less popularity and it is the latest as it opened since 2001 and covers the second least railway route of 28 km.
As is presented in the table, Tokyo railway service had the largest number of passengers which controlled a large share with about 1927 million people annually in 1927. Unlike other railway services, Kyoto consists of the least number of travelers with only 45 million people. Paris and Tokyo are alike that they both are very popular and the number of people visiting them are more than other railway systems. London and Paris are 775 million passengers and 1191 million people respectively whilst Washington DC constitute for about 144 million passengers each year.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05454545455 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42829963523 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.6872874141 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221323591337 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10204090995 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113446345486 0.0603063233224 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180393307304 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135982206376 0.0580467560999 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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