Task-1
You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/ she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- say why he or she would not enjoy going to college.
- Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/Her
- Suggest types of jobs will be suitable for him.
At least 150 words, begin with
Dear...
Dear Karm,
Hope you are well. It was good to learn that you like your new apartment and have managed to make quite a few friends. Well, I was very pleased to have received your letter seeking my advice.
You have taken a bold step of moving to a new country and you shall always have my support in all your endeavors. In my opinion, you shouldn't join college yet, as you have enough liabilities to cater. It's only been a month since you moved!
I suggest you take up a job instead, move to the city center after a few months. Use this time to look up course you are interested in, so you can save enough and afford your own tuition fee for the following new academic year.
You are a talented lad, and finding a job won't be a very difficult task. However, try and look for jobs related to the hospitality sector so that it looks good on your professional portfolio as well. Don't hesitate to try a new career path.
I hope you will take my advice, although I do believe you must follow your own will. We have known each other for over twenty years, and I'm glad that you consider me as your confidant. Anyway, Good luck with your job hunt and stay in touch.
Warm regards,
Natalie
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...received your letter seeking my advice. You have taken a bold step of moving to ...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
... all your endeavors. In my opinion, you shouldnt join college yet, as you have enough li...
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Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...wont be a very difficult task. However, try and look for jobs related to the hospitalit...
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Line 9, column 201, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...on your professional portfolio as well. Dont hesitate to try a new career path. I...
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Line 11, column 138, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...n each other for over twenty years, and Im glad that you consider me as your confi...
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Line 11, column 199, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Good) must be used with a third-person verb: 'lucks'.
Suggestion: lucks
...ider me as your confidant. Anyway, Good luck with your job hunt and stay in touch. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, however, if, look, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34222222222 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19325115235 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617777777778 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8998749358 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7857142857 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162086191846 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058899696383 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288819390124 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959305442461 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159437249329 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.