You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems.Write a letter to be copied to all neighbors that share the parking area. In that letter-• explaining the problems• suggesting ways to help the situation• prop

Essay topics:

You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems.
Write a letter to be copied to all neighbors that share the parking area. In that letter-
• explaining the problems
• suggesting ways to help the situation
• proposing a possible meeting
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Neighbours,

Dear Neighbors,

I am writing to bring to your notice the issues with regard to our common parking area. We are only five families sharing this plot, and I propose we collectively find a solution to the insufficiency of the parking space.

We have limited parking slots, and some members own more than one. Few people have been using others parking spots to accommodate their cars. Due to this, those with just one car, are forced to leave their automobiles in the guest parking lot which is further away from our building and is highly inconvenient.

I suggest that we paint boundaries for efficient use of available space so that more cars can be accommodated. Each flat should be allotted only one parking spot. Other vehicles must be parked in the guest area.

I would be highly obliged if we could make time and fix a meeting for this coming weekend. I request at least one member from each family to attend this discussion and actively participate in resolving this matter.

Hoping for a quick and favorable response.

Yours sincerely,
Khushleen Kaur.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... favorable response. Yours sincerely, Khushleen Kaur.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, at least, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93406593407 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57972738061 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681318681319 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9300603834 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175121265839 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661797204197 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538809245159 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884830893815 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672328669721 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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