You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Ask for some suggestions for what to do
Find out if there are any local events happening at the time
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inquire about the Madhya Pradesh tourist activities for the month of May. I will be traveling to the city of Bhopal for a long weekend, next month.
our accommodation is booked at The Kahana forest Resort, which is very close to the forest reserve. I will be there with my family for a short span of four days. I shall arrive on the 23rd of July- morning and depart on the 26th of July, late evening.
I will be extremely grateful if you could suggest some important destinations to explore and list down a few interesting sights to visit. I will need your assistance to pack the necessary gear for our much-awaited jungle-safari.
I have heard of the tribal festival and the night markets. I request you to provide some more details on the same, along with a local map. Furthermore, I would appreciate any personal recommendations from you. this is our first family-vacation to your start and would like to make it a memorable one with your help.
Hoping for a quick and favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
Kathy Kate
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inquire abou...
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... Bhopal for a long weekend, next month. our accommodation is booked at The Kahan...
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... on the 26th of July, late evening. I will be extremely grateful if you could...
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...down a few interesting sights to visit. I will need your assistance to pack the n...
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...for our much-awaited jungle-safari. I have heard of the tribal festival and t...
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... tribal festival and the night markets. I request you to provide some more detail...
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... any personal recommendations from you. this is our first family-vacation to your st...
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...favorable response. Yours sincerely, Kathy Kate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74468085106 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81416661299 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5673708023 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6153846154 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280390667143 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827071052155 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558186819348 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139170105516 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584766351729 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.