After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
* Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
* Express your appreciation
* And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear Jose,
I am writing to express my utmost gratitude, for taking good care of me after my accident. I have completely recovered from my fracture now and feel absolutely fit as a fiddle.
I am a frequent traveler and often adhere to solo trips. Having met you in Goa, was sheer serendipity. I didn’t get a chance to thank you enough for the care and concern you showered upon an absolute stranger like me.
I would like to sincerely thank you for rushing me to the hospital on time. It was extremely kind of you to pay for my medical expenses and visit me regularly at the health care center. Thank you for comforting me and being a confidant while I was far away from home.
My family and I feel indebted to you for being incredibly helpful. I would like to invite you along with your family to Mumbai to visit my home. It would be my pleasure to host you all and spend some more time knowing you.
The world needs more wonderful human being like you. Thank you for your unforgettable hospitality and generosity. I truly appreciate your gesture and deeds of selflessness. I hope to be able to serve others as you do. Thank you once again.
Yours sincerely,
Khushleen Kaur.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and feel absolutely fit as a fiddle. I am a frequent traveler and often adhere...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56944444444 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59381171733 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578703703704 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.841009761 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0588235294 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7058823529 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.52941176471 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336015309497 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121798499853 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620872932209 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189390811213 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073534643129 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.