You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Technological and scientific advancements in the past decade, have had a huge impact on the human race and its environment. Life-threatening challenges such as overpopulation, ill-literacy, and environmental deterioration are some of the vices faced by many developing nations around the globe.
India, being one of the most populated countries in the world, is sure to face the repercussions of its outcome. An overly populated nation stems out of a lack of appropriate education and awareness. This, in turn, leads to high levels of air, water, and soil pollution. Unemployment, lack of basic hygiene and health facilities and poverty, prove to be a constant challenge.
However, the outcome of the prevailing conditions can be changed or reduced by taking specific measures. The government can introduce awareness programs on birth control. Impart education by setting up a larger number of local schools and university, especially in remote areas. Unemployment is the root cause of poverty.
Health camps and hygiene centric programs can be conducted for the general public. Free basic medical assistance can be offered. Non-profitable organizations must be encouraged to contribute to society by setting up voluntary camps. Introducing special government policies, to ensure a basic standard of livelihood and health is essential.
A global platform where all the countries unite and strive collectively towards eradication of poverty and global warming is utmost important. Organizations such as UNESCO, (United Nations Education, Scientific, Cultural Organization), is a unit that not only works towards a global improvement but also foresees and prevents global threats.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...cy, and environmental deterioration are some of the vices faced by many developing nations ...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ntric programs can be conducted for the general public. Free basic medical assistance can be o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71031746032 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34529928958 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654761904762 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9295766788 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1875 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167545014687 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466998510544 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469745919279 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798344201099 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407208672057 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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