You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you forgot some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter-
- Say where you think you left the papers.
- explain why they are so important.
- tell the manager what you want him or her to do.
At least 150 words. No address. Start from.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Madam,
I am writing to inform you about my recent visit to your hotel, where I happen to misplace some very important documents, which I realized are missing only when I got home.
On Monday afternoon, I attended a business meeting at the 'Shamiana' restaurant on the 2nd level. A fire alarm went off and all the guests were asked to evacuate the restaurant immediately. Hurryingly, I must have left my file on the table where I was seated. We occupied the round table near the terrace exit. We were moved to the cafeteria where the meeting was successfully continued, and we eventually left straight from there.
It is my utmost priority to retrieve that file. It is a contract signed with our new associated partners. The file is yellow in color with a big blue logo on its cover. My company largely depends on this deal.
I would be highly obliged if you could please check with your staff and the restaurant manager for my missing possession. I request you to contact me on my personal number as soon as you find it. My number is 77888777787.
I will need to lodge a police complaint if I am unable to find my documents by tomorrow afternoon. I hope you will do the needful at the earliest.
Yours Sincerely,
Kathleen Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: yellow
...ur new associated partners. The file is yellow in color with a big blue logo on its cover. My c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou will do the needful at the earliest. Yours Sincerely, Kathleen Kaur
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64414414414 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65546175887 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63963963964 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5018807434 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4375 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 4.34317383033 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242209193085 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643032905283 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888760060351 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129248806637 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093424873515 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.