During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about
A possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
* remind him when and where you met
* Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
* Say why you think you would be suitable for a job
Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter as dear...
Dear Mr. Shetty,
I am writing this letter with regard to our conversation about the job offer to work at your restaurant, in Mumbai.
It was a great pleasure to share views and exchange ideas during our journey back from Delhi, last Thursday. Thank you for your kind offer to work with you.
I am well-versed with the hotel industry and have acquired a pertinent experience of five years. My current job profile is of a Banquet Manager and I am looking forward to a role which needs similar management skills.
As per our discussion you need a manager at one of your restaurants-outlets. I opine that I possess the required qualification and ability to handle the challenges that face at a senior managerial level.
I shall be highly obliged if you could fix a meeting next week and offer me a suitable job placement. Hoping for a quick and favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
Kathleen Barnes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ich needs similar management skills. As per our discussion you need a manager a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, well, kind of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89102564103 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94829289021 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.877643269 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180959840752 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656601127976 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648592158733 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958968823873 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483216930836 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.