Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Tourism is a booming all around the world. A large number of people wish to visit uncommon destinations such as the extremely humid areas or incredibly cold regions. In this essay, I would like to discuss the merits and the demerits of a traveler's choice of less-explored places.
On one hand, traveling globally has become relatively easier. A large number of people are able to visit their dream vacation and experience a varied culture and its natural beauty. Many countries are commonly popular amongst a travelers world, however, there are a few destinations with extreme weather and geographical conditions that make the journey tougher but worth the effort.
Moreover, travelers want to make a trip to the most exquisite places, looking forward to an unusual experience. A tour into the wild or a desert safari not only gives tourists a chance to learn about nature but also enriches their perspective towards life. A tour to the northern tip of the world is a rare opportunity to witness the rare phenomena of the northern lights, and enjoy the snow-clad scenery which is not available in one's hometown.
On the other hand, people are generally aware of the severe physical conditions and need to prepare for the same. A trek to the highest peak needs a specific level of fitness and training to carry out the hike successfully. Certain places offer adventurous activities, and the lack of correct gear could be life-threatening. Many tourists are unaware of or underestimate the tasks involved in these expeditions, and end up giving up or have an unsatisfactory experience.
In conclusion, offbeat destinations may be more exciting, but they are definitely more rewarding. Hence, a majority of the global population pick challenging tourist spots with enriching experiences.
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Message: Did you mean 'carrying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: carrying
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17525773196 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00788789936 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5549687847 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148723630101 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377450982002 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373776386968 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707249772567 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307457068081 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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