Task-2
News stories on TV are in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.
What is your opinion about this?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. At least 250 words.
Pictorial evidence and audiovisuals are usually a part of news found in the daily papers and on television news channels. A majority of the population believes that images are more impactful than just words. I strongly opine that visuals speak louder than words. In this essay, I shall discuss the merits of photographs and illustrations in the world of news.
Firstly, Visuals play an important role in eliminating ambiguity and creating an efficient reach to its masses. News reporters often play short video clips or a series of images for a better perception of their viewers. For instance, broadcasting the Indian Air Force's tribute on Independence Day is a visual treat. The marvels of the aircraft formations in the sky along with the fireworks, certainly cannot be understood without any photos or visual representation.
Secondly, some local newspapers, resort to creating caricatures of famous politicians and personalities to make the news attractive. Comic strips and illustrations are observed to be appealing to the youth and hence the publishers use it to make millennial centric campaigns more effective. A typical example of this is active participation of the youngsters in voting and the right to freedom of speech.
Lastly, illiterate persons can understand the pictorial representation of the news rather easily. A majority of the people are able to gauge the intensity of the situation through its visuals. Even historical events are recorded and referred to as important lessons for the human race. For example, pictorial evidence of a war zone or natural calamity-stricken area can help an individual estimate the graveness of the issue.
In my view, an image is more stimulating to the brain as a person uses their imagination actively. News in the form of a sea of words or audio seems redundant and monotonous to people. This makes them lose their interest. To create an impactful awareness, news must carry imagery pertinent to its topic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l estimate the graveness of the issue. In my view, an image is more stimulating...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2358490566 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08143529276 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2449773134 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.6315789474 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0847013618901 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264244632929 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233039211972 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457111794262 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176133610831 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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