You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Among the many global issues, poverty has remained a constant. The poverty line differs in every country. The most common root causes are population, illiteracy and inadequate health awareness.
Both, developing and the developed nations comprise of underprivileged persons that are deprived of basic living conditions.
Developing nations are suffering from the repercussions of overpopulation, which has resulted in an exponential increase in air, water and soil pollution. Developed nations can afford to support such individuals, while the less evolved nations are struggling to make ends meet, by taking preventive measure.
Inadequate measures to eradicate unhygienic living conditions is one of the major reasons for an impoverished society. Lack of food, drinking water, and proper defecating facilities is still a problem in many rural areas. Illiteracy and insufficent employment opportunity have resulted in an increase in crime.
The global presence of a welfare organization such as the UNESCO ( United Nations Special Coordination) is striving together to eliminate poverty by setting up medical camps in remote places, educating the ignorant about birth control, and facilitating them with better infrastructe to run small cottage industry. providing pesticides and better quality seeds and boosting their major occupation. Creating a source of income.
In conclusion, countries must come together and extend a helping hand. We must work together in order to evolve globally and abolish poverty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...h, developing and the developed nations comprise of underprivileged persons that are depriv...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... welfare organization such as the UNESCO United Nations Special Coordination is s...
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Line 9, column 313, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Providing
...astructe to run small cottage industry. providing pesticides and better quality seeds and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86936936937 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06482792294 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68018018018 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.0263426739 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0800331628873 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276282697063 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448276890888 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.035884865898 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277426983321 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.47 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.