You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
In the past few decades, journalism has risen to new levels. Availability of news has progressively become instant. Professional journalism has made it essential to choose appropriate channels to reach out to the masses. A decision as to which aspect of the news will be telecasted or printed is taken by the editor. Here on, I shall discuss a number of factors that are accounted while doing so.
Television is considered to be the fasted medium to reach a large populous. The news is largely categorized into different genres, such as daily events, crime, politics, sports, celebrity gossip, astrology and further on. Any piece of information is prioritized on the basis of severity. For instance, first preference is given to events which need immediate public attention, like natural calamities, terrorist attack, murder or theft.
Newspapers, on the other hand, are extremely cheap but are not as effective as the News broadcasted on television. Newspapers enjoy readership of the literate classes and more knowledgeable individuals. It has more detailed information on current topics and events. It also consists of recreational columns such as subjective articles, offers, and advertisements.
It has been observed that the news is flooded with mishaps and unfortunate happenings around the world. Responsible journalism needs to take charge and alter the negative perception of news in society. The Arabs adopt a very unusual act of spreading positivity. A special show is aired on news channels, which honors and appreciated the citizens who have been responsible and abiding the law. This encourages others to do well.
Many people are accustomed to acquiring news in the mornings. Hence, it is always preferred to start the day on a positive note. News often leaves a certain impact on impressionable young minds. In order to build a healthy and safe society, we need to replace misfortunes with more assertive reports that leave a more positive effect publicly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to appropriate'
Suggestion: to appropriate
...rnalism has made it essential to choose appropriate channels to reach out to the masses. A ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rticles, offers, and advertisements. It has been observed that the news is floo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, well, while, as to, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30476190476 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04656066278 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9583923716 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9545454545 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3181818182 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.057893059771 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0160675153835 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0193841007107 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0312909156845 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201036732631 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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