A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
• describe the benefits of sponsoring the ports team
• Summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
• Say how you think the company should spend the money
Write at least 150 words
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madame,
Dear Madame,
I am writing with regard to your opinion poll advertised on the billboard in my locality. Your manufacturing unit has been a landmark in our vicinity and I do appreciate your good-will to contribute back to society.
Your company’s energy drink is popular with the youth and I opine that funding the Andheri Sports Club football team, will be an excellent choice. For the following two years, this is a good platform to encourage the under-16 players to target representing their team at the state-level tournaments.
However, financing an outdoor concert will attract larger crowds. This will be a great platform to reach vast audiences in a shorter span of time. Although, a similar event was hosted last year.
I believe that an opportunity to spread awareness to other forms of sports such as football is vital. Sponsoring a game event will create an acceptance for this sport and promote fitness amongst general masses. I will be looking forward to the announcement of your final decision.
I hope you favor my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Khushleen Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
...rtised on the billboard in my locality. Your manufacturing unit has been a landmark ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r team at the state-level tournaments. However, financing an outdoor concert wi...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...st audiences in a shorter span of time. Although, a similar event was hosted last year. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...avor my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Khushleen Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19101123596 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9046628078 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691011235955 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9905370751 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14772040602 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449958681011 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510032351991 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672675964968 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692648199128 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.