You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The food industry has always thrived on the demands of taste buds. However, health awareness in recent times has changed the outlook on eating habits. Being a vegetarian by choice, I believe that there are more benefits to a vegetarian diet than a meat eating one. In this essay, I shall like to discuss the same.
Although there are a majority of nonvegetarians around the world, the statics are slowing beginning to favor the vegans and vegetarians. In countries like India, a large populous is known to be non-meat eaters. A large population chooses to be vegetarian, either due to religious beliefs, cruelty meted to animals, or just as a personal choice.
Defying myths to health-related topics and misconceptions against the lack of nutritional value of a vegetarian meal has now changed. A meal free of any meat or fish is much easier to digest. The chances of contracting any viral or flu are almost negligible.
The concept of mass breeding animals and slaughtering them for selfish reasons to satisfy gluttonous desires are not very appealing to a large part of society. For instance, G.M.O’s (Genetically modified organisms) used to obtain a certain quality of chicken, are harmful to the human body. Overconsumption of meat and other sea creatures disturbed the ecological balance. Extinction and endangerment of certain species have resulted due to this practice.
There is an entire food industry built around this misconception of healthy eating and serving. I strongly believe that adopting a vegetarian lifestyle is not only health but also beneficial to the ecosystem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majorities'?
Suggestion: majorities
...scuss the same. Although there are a majority of nonvegetarians around the world, the...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: O&apos
...arge part of society. For instance, G.M.O's Genetically modified organisms used t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21705426357 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02598763477 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624031007752 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4939898289 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.125 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178328002869 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507876651796 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410574245299 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917313439417 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480744759277 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.