Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
- give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
- explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community
- describe the position effects on local people if the center closes.
At least 150 words. Begin your letter as follow: Dear Sir or Madame.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my grievance, with regard to the proposal of demolishing the local sports center. I suggest you take other measures to save revenue, rather than closing it down permanently.
The 'Lions Club' is one of its only kind, in this locality and has over five thousand members. My family and I have been regular users of the gym and swimming pool facilities here. There are several members of the society especially the senior citizens, including my grandfather, who daily looks forward to his evening yoga session.
Many young children are coached for professional sports such as tennis and cricket. Recreational activities on Sundays’ have made the neighborhood more familiar and friendly. Young adults are using the amenities available at the gym to keep fit. Aged people are frequent visitors at the garden to enjoy fresh air and social conversations with others. If the sports center closed down, the local community will be adversely affected.
People will be directed to an unhealthy lifestyle. Children will not have enough space to play due to the lack of public gardens and leisure centers in this locality. Senior citizens will be forced to stay home and this may further cause illnesses of the mind and body.
I suggest you levy an additional fee to those who violate rules and misuse the facilities. A collective, conscious effort by the authority and the members towards saving electricity and water could help avoid many unnecessary expenses. This sports center is not only easily accessible to the
Hoping for a quick and favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
Kathleen
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s forward to his evening yoga session. Many young children are coached for prof...
^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... community will be adversely affected. People will be directed to an unhealthy ...
^^^
Line 11, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter is not only easily accessible to the Hoping for a quick and favorable respons...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... favorable response. Yours sincerely, Kathleen
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18113207547 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72152659608 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671698113208 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 290.88556701 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0999946492 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7647058824 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47058823529 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181314468123 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053007832575 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582038209284 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709634681344 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535750908515 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 41.2886597938 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.