You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
* describe the problem with the equipment.
* Explain how this problem is affecting your work.
* Say what you want the shop or company to do.
* Write at least 150 words
* Begin your letter as follow- Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my disappointment with my recent purchase at your retail store in Mumbai. I bought the latest version of the digital sketchpad, the "Intuous - genius".
I am an illustrator and freelance for various creative agencies. On unpacking the product, the main wire that connects the digital pad to the desktop is non-functional. The kit has only one main connecting wire while the instruction manual mentions a pair. This is causing a hindrance to my professional commitments.
My decision to buy your most expensive, top of the line equipment was mainly to quicken my creative process. Due to the lack of the wire, I am unable to use my new tablet. This is affecting my productivity.
I would like you to immediately replace the defected piece and also provide another spare set as promised by your company. Additionally, I expect a free home delivery and a discount on my next purchase for the inconvenience caused to me.
Hoping for a quick and favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
Kathleen
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my disappointmen...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., the 'Intuous - genius'. I am an illustrator and freelance for var...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12790697674 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20972202534 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674418604651 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3234698479 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8461538462 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2307692308 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130953164945 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451939515175 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377112084489 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634317231036 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343075717122 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.