These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
Globalization is at its peak, and people have found their calling in broadened prospects, offered in countries abroad. A more favorable career opportunity, a recognized qualification or a mere choice of better lifestyle, are luring citizens to migrate to different parts of the world. Although it has been proved advantageous to a majority, there are growing numbers of those who face the downside of leaving their homeland.
The perks of immigrating evidently outshine the opportunities available in the residential country. Youngsters opting for short-term exchange programmes, or representing their country at an international conference, get a chance to learn a great deal about other nations and their cultures. Globetrotters seek enriching experiences pertaining to various local delicacies, clothing style, mannerism and even languages spoken in different regions.
World-renowned universities are attracting a large number of students who want to acquire higher qualifications, in order to land high-paying job profiles. Businessmen with a view to expanding, enter international markets have increasingly become successful. Choosing a foreign location could be either for a short period to add to their desired results or with an intent, to settle down for good.
Migrators move to developed countries, as the standard of living is qualitative. The benefits of being a citizen of a first world country are considered as a matter of pride and convenience. With awareness of customs and trends followed by many nationalities, one is able to respect the differences in opinion and co-exist peacefully.
However, the disadvantages of being away from one's birthplace could put them through the trauma of racial and religious discrimination. Unemployment, deprivation of better opportunities, language barriers are a struggling phase for a few. A constant reminder of being an outsider and the reluctance to blend into the new culture are some of the common problems, immigrants meet.
I believe that that moving to a foreign country could open doors to serendipity, but prospering and contributing to one's motherland, and its betterment is a duty of every responsible citizen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63141993958 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41096577609 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658610271903 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0150543084 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137956888125 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357606942301 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295221978547 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584700775335 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367637620346 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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