There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Mr Markle,
I am writing this to inform you about some of the difficulties I have recently faced while travelling in your public transit.
You are well aware of the fact that a large number of people especially the students and daily wedge workers are using this transport. So, it is really important for them to be on time to their workplaces. I have observed that during the last fifteen days the bus is being late regularly. Therefore, we reached to our destination about 10 to 15 minutes late. Not only this but also the driver is used to of driving rough and taking risks at very dangerous roads. Most of the time he is driving above 60 km/hour which is the speed limit in the area.
Hence, in this way neither I feel safe during the ride, nor I reach on time. There problems are not only affecting me but also, the other fellow travelers. No one feels comfort in travelling in such circumstances. This transport is actually very feasible for the college and university pupils, but problems like this are causing so much tension among them. I am recommending few alterations which would be helpful for you.
Firstly, the driver should be trained of following all the traffic rules. Secondly, he should made punctual by imposing some about as fine on being late. In this way, we would be able to enjoy a more reliable and efficient bus service, which would ultimately benefit the organization.
I am sure you would consider my request and respond as soon as possible.
Thank you
Sincerely Yours
Thomas John
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...espond as soon as possible. Thank you Sincerely Yours Thomas John
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...ank you Sincerely Yours Thomas John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77985074627 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55985378773 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3317299347 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3529411765 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10500038487 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310704716108 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365307119828 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05012115367 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279516226376 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.