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The information given in the table makes comparisons in the percentage of students who was successful in different aspects namely, teaching quality, print resources, electronic resources, range of modules offered, buildings/teaching facilities in university in 2000,2005 and 2010.
Overall, what stands out from the table is that print resources were successful aspect for students while the Lowest number was attributed by range of modules offered in all given years.Another interesting point is that the proportion of students who giving good rate for building/teaching facilities remained unchanged during the given period.Value is given in percentages.
It can be observed that in 2005 the percentage of students who was successful in print resources stood at 87 making slightly more than building /teaching facilities with 77.The figures for print resources increased by 2 to 89 in 2005.Hiwever,in 2010 this upward trend changed and indicators fell to 87 in 2010 while the figures for building /teaching facilities remained unchanged . The percentage of students who giving good rate in range of modules offered reached little less than the half of the figures for buildings /teaching facilities in 2000.Then,,the indicators of range of modules offered decline and in 2010
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62694300518 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27387362088 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507772020725 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 16.3608247423 293% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9778186128 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 271.5 76.5299724578 355% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.25 16.8248392259 287% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0554498658853 0.216113520407 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379341881726 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0159055718258 0.0603063233224 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0428297066107 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00815489493583 0.0580467560999 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 8.37731958763 349% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 70.7449484536 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 3.82989690722 381% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 7.45979381443 311% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 8.71597938144 187% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 8.62886597938 243% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 8.54432989691 248% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 8.15463917526 258% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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