Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
• More and more people are living in big cities these days.what are the advantages and disadvantages of this for society and the individual?
Nowadays,the number of people who live in big cities is increasing all around the world.Many people,specially mature people prefer to live in big cities.However,there are both pros and cons to doing this.
One of the main positives of living big cities is modern life.What l mean by this is that people who live in big cities are more modern than people who live in countryside.In fact, population of big cities are more concerned about their children,s education.As a result of increasing the number of population of cities,education is developing in countries.
Turning to the other side of the argument crowd is a major issue It is well known that there are a lot of people in public places such as buses,trains thats why people encounter some diffuculties when they want to go somewhere and so.on.Specially, students suffer from this problem.
Another disadvantege is lack of agricultural products.In fact,people who live in countryside provide population of cities with these products.As a sequence of rising the number of cities' people, rural population can not supplies their own farming products to the urban population.
All things considered , increasing the number of rural population is not never efficient .people need to weigh up the pros of modern life and the cons of crowd and lack of agricultural products.Personally ,l strongly believe that the cons of increasing of urban population outweigh any pros.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25793650794 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3772616194 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5638388657 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 220.833333333 106.682146367 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0280669002644 0.244688304435 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.017683616105 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0148964697281 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.017683616105 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148964697281 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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