U stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend:1- Describe the file2- Ask him to return it to you by post3- Ask him about the a

Essay topics:

U stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room.

Write a letter to your friend:

1- Describe the file
2- Ask him to return it to you by post
3- Ask him about the approximate cost of sending the documents.

Dear Kareem,

How are you doing? It`s been a long time since we last met during my last business Seminar in Australia. I`m writing to inform you that I have left an important file in the room where I was staying at your house.

If you searched for in the room, you will find a green dossier which has A4 documents. It contains my original graduation certificate and some important documents related to the current project which I am handling.

My application to my post graduate studies should be latest by next week, so it is urgent to get this file. When I was staying at your home, I saw a post office nearby your home location. Hence, it would be the better option if you send it to me by post directly to my home address. I can receive it very easily.

There are multiple fright options while sending any document, but I recommend that you choose the express way which it takes only three working days in delivery. I will cover all the costs; though, tell me the estimated cost of the shipping to arrange it for you accordingly.

Looking forward to receiving the documents as soon as possible.

Warm regards,

Ayoub

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the latest'.
Suggestion: be the latest
...tion to my post graduate studies should be latest by next week, so it is urgent to get th...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6568627451 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50389930434 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68137254902 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0846449064 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0769230769 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284080801357 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871677796105 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899666064139 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139569025471 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964526146319 0.0580467560999 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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