Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter,A)Introduce yourself,B)Explain what the problem is,C)Suggest solutions to the problem

Essay topics:

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.

Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter,

A)Introduce yourself,
B)Explain what the problem is,
C)Suggest solutions to the problem

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my concern over the noise pollution being created due to the maintenance work on the street.

My name is Jessica Ayri. A resident of Spring park since a decade. My house number is 135 and it is situated right beside the garden near to the grocery.

Unfortunately, since few days there has been immense noise on the street across my house. As per my inquiry, I got to know that there is a maintenance work going on for the gas pipeline installation. Due to the work in late night hours, my kids are not able to sleep and their routine is disturbed. Also, the workers create noise unnecessarily during their break time. I had spoken to the project manager who is incharge of the site but they are not co-operative.

Also, I would like to request, if you could personally come and visit the place during their operation hours. However, if you are unable to come, I will appreciate if you can send them a legal warning notice for disturbing a residential area during midnight.

Looking forward to seeing your prompt response.

Yours faithfully,
Jessica Ayri

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74358974359 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63779239478 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.65508366 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1538461538 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134343607724 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420261545051 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371012627419 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666259041114 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374568903554 0.0580467560999 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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