write a letter to the company manager regarding online item that you have purchased. Describe the item . What is the issue is ? What you expect the manager to do ?
Dear sir or madam,
i am writing in express to the complaint regarding a printer that I have purchased from your prestigious online website 'save on electronics ' on 25th august 2019. Let me elaborate in details.
Initially, the product I borrowed was of company Canon. It is black in colour and includes peculiar features of a scanner and colour printing.
Due to the 70 % of clearance on your electronic products on the website i have made up my mind to purchase it. Finally, it was to deliver to my residential address on 1 September 2019. I was excited to use this new gadget as well as i was waiting to print my some official documents. Unfortunately, after plugging it with my desktop the moment i have clicked the print option to print my files it didn't work. I tried continuously to start printing it didn't respond. I was feeling petite at my situation, as those documents was urgently needed for my next day meeting. In that circumstance, i have to rush to the local printer shop.
At the end of the day, i have called many times to your customer service. Unluckily, they have not responded to my calls. After two days, i got a call from your customer representative he said me that they will take back printer for repair but they have not arrived until now. So i want you to refund my guaranteed money back. As i was thinking of getting it repair but your poor quality customer service had made me change up my mind.
i look forward to reply from you soon ,
yours sincerely,
sarab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Dear sir or madam, i am writing in express to the complaint ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom your prestigious online website save on electronics on 25th august 2019. Let...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ious online website save on electronics on 25th august 2019. Let me elaborate in...
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Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
... I borrowed was of company Canon. It is black in colour and includes peculiar features of a sc...
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Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anon. It is black in colour and includes peculiar features of a scanner and colou...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...cited to use this new gadget as well as i was waiting to print my some official d...
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Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...d the print option to print my files it didnt work. I tried continuously to start pri...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...tried continuously to start printing it didnt respond. I was feeling petite at my sit...
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Line 5, column 589, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... next day meeting. In that circumstance, i have to rush to the local printer shop...
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Line 6, column 138, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... responded to my calls. After two days, i got a call from your customer represen...
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Line 6, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ded to my calls. After two days, i got a call from your customer representative h...
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Line 6, column 189, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...ll from your customer representative he said me that they will take back printer for...
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Line 6, column 281, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...but they have not arrived until now. So i want you to refund my guaranteed money ...
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Line 6, column 332, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to refund my guaranteed money back. As i was thinking of getting it repair but y...
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Line 6, column 361, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'repairs'?
Suggestion: repairs
... back. As i was thinking of getting it repair but your poor quality customer service ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...rvice had made me change up my mind. i look forward to reply from you soon , ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rvice had made me change up my mind. i look forward to reply from you soon , ...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to replying'.
Suggestion: to replying
...me change up my mind. i look forward to reply from you soon , yours sincerely, sara...
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Line 8, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... i look forward to reply from you soon , yours sincerely, sarab .
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Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rom you soon , yours sincerely, sarab .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, look, regarding, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56296296296 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70344560178 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4968353163 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4705882353 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0755525352408 0.216113520407 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271864140877 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288982197092 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554113162868 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287641910898 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.