You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency.
In your letter:
- introduce yourself
- explain what sort of job you would like
- say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Anne,the student of a post graduate program in Bachelor of commerce. The reasons for my writing is to offer me some flexible working hours during my futile time.
Basically, I have my course classes during the weekdays, but my weekends are vacant. So, I had made a decision to indulge in an occupation. As I am an accounts students, the job similar to this academic course will help me to enhance my career. Similarly, I have a hands on experience through specified practices in the calculations, math and business. Although, I am a business students but i have the capabilities to indulge in other work too.
Furthermore, I have physical qualities of hard worker, punctuality, self-reliance, preserver and initiative to the new plans and innovative too. Moreover, I diligently do my job as well as duties and responsibilities assigned to within given deadline. Also, I have done have 6 months experience in doing a volunteer job for the hospital management as a front desk help.
Currently, I work for particular two weekdays for short hours in an office as a cashier. Besides, I am enclosing my C.V with this letter. For further information you can call me in evenings.
I shall look forward towards your favourable response.
Yours sincerely,
Anne
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Anne,the student of a post graduate program in B...
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Line 9, column 264, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hand' or simply 'hands'?
Suggestion: a hand; hands
...to enhance my career. Similarly, I have a hands on experience through specified practic...
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Line 9, column 380, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'student'?
Suggestion: student
...and business. Although, I am a business students but i have the capabilities to indulge ...
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Line 17, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...a cashier. Besides, I am enclosing my C.V with this letter. For further informati...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, similarly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10185185185 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13202570999 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.857089947 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4666666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187112865108 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056199048333 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354480992464 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091952136309 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359249516772 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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