Write a letter to the council for the dirty street:
Explain why it has become dirty recently?
What problem it has caused?
Giving some suggestions.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about the sanitation and cleanliness problems on our favorite Smith street. Nowadays, the garbage collection vans are throwing the collected junk on the roadside in an open area, and this is increasingly polluting the street and the nearby surroundings. On questioning one of the staff in charge, I learned that it is due to the absence of large dumping bins or containers and therefore these vehicles are carelessly throwing the waste material on the ground.
As a result, not only there is an increasingly widespread viral disease, but also makes the street, disgusting to cross. Consequently, people residing or working nearby are falling prey to the germs and bacteria, thus they have become prone to harmful diseases.
I would like to suggest that the area should be cleared as soon as possible and vast waste disposal vessels must be installed at the spot.
I look forward to a prompting action from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Abhishek Saxena
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, look, so, therefore, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09580838323 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80676766217 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712574850299 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3455715125 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 4.34317383033 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0655621968251 0.216113520407 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238274617083 0.0766984524023 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317060448261 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0284054861693 0.12726935374 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294344533632 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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