Write a letter to an English speaker friend
-explain why you changed jobs
-describe your new job
-tell him/her your other news
Dear Maria
As you know I had to move to Colorado because of my new job. I never had the chance to inform you why I resigned so suddenly. The truth is, I was very disappointed with the firm. I was working overtime to get things done. My boss was never happy with the things I had done. Despite all the effort, I never got a compliment or a good word from him.
I made up my mind after some time thinking about it and took this job here in Colorado. It is a smaller firm than Waco but, there's a young talented team willing to take risks and thinking out of the box. Something I get along very well with it. So far, I feel great being here. There's a lot of work to do, new projects, many meetings with possible customers, a great work environment, and a brand new office for me.
Something amazing happens to me. I just got promoted to project leader, so, I will be leading a group of six persons in a very exciting new tech project.
My dear, I would love to have you here in Colorado next month. Hope you can make it.
Miss you.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...My boss was never happy with the things Ive done. Despite all the effort, I never g...
^^^
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
...th it. So far, I feel great being here. Theres a lot of work to do, new projects, many...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14285714286 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24881028779 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64039408867 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6444574057 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0666666667 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5333333333 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06666666667 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103284127437 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335271086571 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388957193875 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05444154599 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025135192099 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.14 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...My boss was never happy with the things Ive done. Despite all the effort, I never g...
^^^
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
...th it. So far, I feel great being here. Theres a lot of work to do, new projects, many...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14285714286 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24881028779 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64039408867 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6444574057 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0666666667 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5333333333 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06666666667 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103284127437 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335271086571 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388957193875 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05444154599 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025135192099 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.14 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.