Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your home town and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say
– why you thought about him/her
– describe the furniture
– suggest a way for him/her to get it
Dear John,
I am glad to inform you that I’m going back to join my family again. I can leave some of my furniture items to you since you were looking for a coffee table few days ago.
As I was aware that you are saving some money to renew your car, and also, I don’t need these stuffs anymore so instead of purchasing for a coffee table you can have mine.
For our similar tendency to antique items I hope you’ll like it. I had bought it from an ancient accessory shop which has unspoiled items. The coffee table is brown and because of it’s roundish shape it’s adjustable too.
I will leave the city on 24th August therefore you can barrow your boyfriend’s car and come to my apartment to take away the items.
inform me about your plan on early basis. looking forward to seeing you at my place
Your friend,
Chi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sh shape it's adjustable too. I will leave the city on 24th August the...
^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Inform
... apartment to take away the items. inform me about your plan on early basis. look...
^^^^^^
Line 21, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...form me about your plan on early basis. looking forward to seeing you at my place ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67741935484 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38732344172 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683870967742 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1831195332 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5555555556 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205941319097 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873490337351 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461037048414 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113985299891 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409769500169 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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