Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
advertisements play a specific role on selling a majority of products. According to some, people are encouraged to buy unnecessary products by advertising; however, many believe they are announcements of new items which are produced to improve our life. In my opinion advertisements are essential as they benefits personal and society.
A good reason that advertising is not just a motivator for buying waste products, also it indicates about new supply is that as technology is progressing and promoting, its essential that people will be learned how to use these new products. advertisements as a guide aware them how to use those products. For instance, commercial video tells audiences new automatic laces which are close automatically just by saying the word “close”.
Another reason which is important to advertise to aware people about new detection is that advertising make producer rivalry. it propel factories and companies to improve their products because they are watching others company’s productions. In other words, it is obvious a product which is more advertised have a increasing rate of selling in comparison with a not advertised product. This issue encourage producer to compare their productions with each other and try to improve them.
In conclusion, despite of some people who think commercials are mere staggering to buy not useful items. In my opinion its undeniable that they are vital for awareness of new developments and technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'propels'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47186147186 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2494764914 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593073593074 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1308257657 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309951664791 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109475707682 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060326594738 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175352998404 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725479755462 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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