Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
It is being believed by several people, that publicity of a product sometime mismanages the budget, because of extra useless shopping. While other assume this is a way to know about the recent launched product. I agree with the second one that it is a way of knowing product existence in the society.
Promoting a product is a part of selling strategy, by which company tells us about the feature of its product, which we are searching sometime. In other words advertisement is way to familiar with the brand which we can use in future. To illustrate, Bajaj Company recently launch a two-wheeler with extra features like reverse gear, use of electricity in the place of fuel and many more. Who believe in that company because of its goodwill can pay in advance as booking of that scooter. Therefore, advertisement is the only way from where people get aware about upcoming stuff in the market.
Knowing, exciting offers on particular stuff because of some special occasion can only be possible through publicity. It is very helpful to save money by purchasing in advance during offer seasons. For example, it is very cold from November to January and the discount available on room heaters only be possible during September and October month so that people can buy that stuff in advance and secure their funds. Hence, by these kinds of information individuals can buy goods at reasonable rates.
Conclusively, advertising something means spreading the news of available product. It does not mean they force you to buy the stuff immediate. It is a matter of some one’s choice they can take it either as positive or negative. It think the impact of advertising is excellent as compare to bad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...get, because of extra useless shopping. While other assume this is a way to know abou...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...amiliar with the brand which we can use in future. To illustrate, Bajaj Company recently ...
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Line 13, column 234, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...take it either as positive or negative. It think the impact of advertising is exce...
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Line 13, column 237, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'thinks'?
Suggestion: thinks
...e it either as positive or negative. It think the impact of advertising is excellent ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95138888889 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71745037761 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8864030704 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202595642622 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642888245049 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567003931806 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112681857062 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571654809327 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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