Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Buying stuff under the influence of advertisement have become popular among people. Some think that it wastes the money due to extra consumption, while other believe it tells us the quality version of a particular stuff. I agree with both the facts and disclose in subsequent paragraphs.
Watching or listening about attractive offers on available products, force the people to spend money on these products whether they are required or not. For example, during the occasion of Diwali one of my friend saw 25% off on smart LED Television made by Panasonic and he ordered the same. Although he has already 2 set of LED in his home, but because of smart discount he bought another one which is still not opened. Hence some time advertisement create burden on someone’s pocket.
On the other side, only through the publicity people get know about the improved version of existing product. So, we cannot neglect these types of promotion to get rid from cheap quality stuff. To illustrate initially Santoor bodywash was very greasy and unable to clean the germs of body, because less foam-based product. But now company change the formula and raise the standard of product with sweet fragrance & more foam in same price. After that they paste posters & hoarding of improved packing and increase the turnover of that product. Therefore, now people can choose quality product with manageable budget.
Conclusively, announcement of any goods have both pros and cons but it depend on the consumers how they can take that advertisement for their profit or loss.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, still, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12062256809 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64210048649 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677042801556 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1022068484 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196106842388 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602052794815 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369296303089 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100418233729 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477846599693 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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