Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree?
treating the offenders with loyalty is a best way as compared to send them into jail for many years. I agree with the statement and also present my favourable views with real facts in subsequent pragraphs.
As per expert physcologists, they said if people will behave rigidly with accused then consequently it will work opposite, because a fear of capitivity will disappear from their mind and they become more cruel towards humanity. it may result more crime into the society. For example, in juvenile crime youngers imprisonment will work adversly. they will spoil their life rather to improvement in the company of bad peers already capted in the jail. Therefore rather to behave them with rigidity try to react softness with them so that they can think about their life improvement.
Sometimes crime are committed under pressure and self protection. In those circumstances intentions are not bad so these kinds of situations may be treated differently so, that the chance of improvement can be given to innocents. To illustrate in a news report a girl from Haryana aged 26 murdered two adults in self deffence, because the purpose of both males are malicious that is rape. In this situation girl was innocent and team of judges took decision to protect that girl from society send her into a government school far away from her residence where she completed her studies and achieve a desired position in nationalised sector. Hence, this approach can change the view of society towards culprits.
Conclusively, behaving the criminals with strictness can work negatively, which cannot good for the society as well as individual. so as per my view everybody should have a right of one chance in which he can try to improve himself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04844290657 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74268113001 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612456747405 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1239000335 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11718910305 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407183487002 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672579183439 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850873266949 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804750272459 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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