News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures.
Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.
What is your opinion about this
newspapers and tv have played an essential role to aware people around all the events of the world. According to some, news, which includes pictures, are more impressive than sentences. In my opinion, I agree that pictures persuade and help readers and they are more efficient than sentences.
A good reason to use images in report is that it gives people whether educated or illiterate a summarized news. At the present, there are many people whom couldn’t learn alphabets and are not able to read any sentences, therefore, these kind of pictures are really helpful to inform them about what are happening around the world.
Another reason to consider is that having pictures in stories makes news more eye-catching. newspapers and tv programs are actually more reliable and exciting while they are demonstrating that event with a real picture. For example, a report from a breathtaking football match with the picture of winner team’s goalkeeper and a captived-ball in his hand makes an spectacular effect on audiences.
Finally, processing pictures in few seconds are much easier for brain than reading them in few minutes and they are copied in our memory less than a second, therefore, as a person satisfied by a picture, he can start reading the entire topic about it and
In conclusion, reports on tv and newspapers are surrounded by illustrations .Their effects are certainly next to words and sentences. pictures were always a stimulator for reading the notes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, really, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17355371901 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87164812492 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615702479339 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.4574234612 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.2 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279047048193 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104022310953 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394450871005 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140086766119 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519163857019 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.