Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
Apologize for damaging the product
Explain what happened
Say how are you going to fix the issue
Dear Sam,
I am writing to apologize for damaging the blazer which I borrowed from you. I attended the success party of our recently launched software application wearing your blazer. During the event a few drops of the drink were spilt on the coat.
Let me explain the incident in more detail. As I was having a drink at the party, I was hit by a child who was playing around. Due to which the wine glass which I was holding slipped from my hands and a few drops of the drink were spilt on the upper part of the jacket. As the coat is white, the marks are clearly visible and it looks awkward.
I am taking the coat to the dry cleaner. If the stains do not go away, I will replace the coat with a new one. I solicit you not to worry about the jacket.
Hoping to hear from you soon
Regards
Abhinay
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 661.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2101910828 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10925180147 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630573248408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6197643088 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0909090909 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154295027438 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566205542986 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849820406064 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108610635878 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651368495802 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.