Dear Sam,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you to say sorry because the mobile phone I had borrowed from you last week got damaged.
Yesterday I had been to market to purchase daily grocery items and unfortunately I was hit by a car while crossing the road. I was luckily unharmed, however your mobile got a small crack on the screen which I think can be easily replaced in the market.
As you know, there is a small mobile repair shop near my apartment and tomorrow morning I’ll meet the technician, so as to get the screen of your mobile replaced. Since you had recently bought this phone, I can understand how bad it feels once such things get damaged. Once the screen of mobile is fixed, I’ll give you a call and keep you updated. I know you will forgive me, as it was not intentional.
See you soon.
Warm wishes,
James
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...morrow morning ill meet the technician, so as to get the screen of your mobile replaced....
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, while, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 461.0 937.175257732 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 102.0 206.0 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51960784314 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.17797182781 3.78020617076 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38203015646 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 127.690721649 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71568627451 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 140.4 290.88556701 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6455739258 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8571428571 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213194358853 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954735347395 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091345621389 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140156149203 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126679534581 0.0580467560999 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 41.2886597938 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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