Write a letter to the headmaster In your letter state which course you are enrolled in provide details about the noted differences suggest what actions you would like him to take

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the headmaster. In your letter,

state which course you are enrolled in

provide details about the noted differences

suggest what actions you would like him to take

Dear Headmaster,

I have been joined a Computer application course in PHP two months ago in your institute. It was going really well in the beginning but after eight weeks, I realized it is not going as mentioned of the brochure. In admission brochure there was mentioned 6 steps which are related to PHP technology ie: Introduction, Implementation of PHP, Uses of conditions, If else fundamentals, benefits of PHP and Project. In my class tutors are not serious and also they taught us lessons which are out of the scope. I have mentioned them these topics are not useful for us but they denied and told me we are teaching these topics from last 2 years. I have gathered very good image of your institution and i know you will consider my request on serious note.

I would like you to take serious action on the teacher who are spoiling the careers of the students. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Faithfully,
PJS

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Average: 8.2 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 695, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...very good image of your institution and i know you will consider my request on se...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...onsider my request on serious note. I would like you to take serious action o...
^
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e spoiling the careers of the students. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67469879518 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73326736193 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66265060241 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.935398915 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158953683858 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678592353361 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648330940084 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145633773424 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718101551837 0.0580467560999 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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