Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. Let them know when you will be•arriving and leaving•what type of rooms you would like and how much the weekend will cost.•Also, enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. Let them know when you will be
• arriving and leaving
• what type of rooms you would like and how much the weekend will cost.
• Also, enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.

Dear Sir,

Iam writing to you regarding to necessary arrangement in your hotel. Me and my family are planned to stay at your hotel from 28rd July to 5th August.

I would like to tell you about the room requirments, according to my family members. I need two rooms large in size with attached bathroom, and must be accommodate at seafront with balconies enjoyable aesthetical view of sea. kindly let me know about the whole weekend expenses as well as, aware me, if you have any weekend package for the families.

We came from Canada first time, so we want to visit some places. I appreciate you if you tell me about the places, which are really worth visiting near to your hotel. This is my email address epanhwar@gmail.com, Iam expecting comprehensive reply from your side about the details of activities and places as I requested.

Iam looking forward to hear, from you as soon as possible.

Your sincerely,

Erum Jahangir

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: large
... to my family members. I need two rooms large in size with attached bathroom, and must be acc...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Kindly
...nies enjoyable aesthetical view of sea. kindly let me know about the whole weekend exp...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 21, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... as I requested. Iam looking forward to hear, from you as soon as possible. Your ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, regarding, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91925465839 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78558791268 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67701863354 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7945526582 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229946744331 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870486573353 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692882715446 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128718268802 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486279909013 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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