You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
. thank your friend for the holiday.
. explain that you left your wallet in their house.
. give them instructions of how to send it back to you.
Dear Lilly,
I hope you are keeping well. I’m just writing to thank you for spending the great weekend with me and my family. I had been enjoyed, specially my younger son he did great fun with your children, that time was very precious for my memories.
I forgot my wallet at your home. However, i have remembered when we were taking tea, after came from outside, that time i kept my wallet on the table hopefully, it is still there. It contains my national identification card, and also some other important identification cards incudes such as Driving license card, company health card and ATM cards.
Whenever, you have time kindly send it through courier at my official address, which i often use.as soon as possible. I would be very thankful to you.
Iam waiting to spend more holidays with you. I hope you come to my hometown, and i will be your host next time around.
Best regards,
Erum Jahangir
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tea, after came from outside, that time i kept my wallet on the table hopefully, ...
^
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ou. I hope you come to my hometown, and i will be your host next time around. Be...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72670807453 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47738118543 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708074534161 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4360360349 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1818181818 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289290333732 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123813157746 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737650661668 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188371312055 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648734427677 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.