Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life

Essay topics:

Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life.

Forest is the compelling natural energy; it is boosting the oldest living ecosystem. In recent times deforestation of the tall dense jungle is a grave issue of the every industerlized country.it could be promoted to finish the living things of the planet.

First of all, rainforests are the natural property of the globe. People are being lived around the rainforests depend on food, energy, security, income and medical purpose as well. Therefore, cutting of large trees is created environmental, economic and social aspects. Environmental issues are deforestation as a result of that loss of habitats and biodiversity. However, it has been a large impacting on the climate change for more than 20 years.
In addition, recent research has been done on the major causes of carbon emission in an urban area approximately 190 million tonnes carbon emission has been transferred into the atmosphere in 2013 by the anthropogenic activities. In metropolitan areas carbon emission is being induced by heavy the traffic, industrialization unit and burning of solid waste are the major causes of the carbon emission. thus, deforestation is being generated by the overcrowded urbanization, land has been converted into urban sprawl and agricultural expansion have been kept on cleaning forest.it would be created more rooms for their respective activities.
Secondly, forest is the home to the richest wildlife in the world. Rainforests logging are being demolished the animal life, that are mostly being living in the dense forest, such as panda, bear, lion.
To sum up, it should design the sustainable solutions in the shape of policies by the collaboration of government and public sector.it could be arranged environmental workshops, events with the participation of schools, universities to motivate and provide awareness to overcome rain forests logging is a problem in the tropical region.

Votes
Average: 9.4 (5 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 402, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...he major causes of the carbon emission. thus, deforestation is being generated by th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 7.48453608247 361% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 937.175257732 171% => OK
No of words: 295.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43728813559 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12787873726 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 290.88556701 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7850044303 44.8134815571 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.384615385 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 4.34317383033 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103328637807 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337760040306 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576208831366 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689659048395 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757000853351 0.0580467560999 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 8.37731958763 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 70.7449484536 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 7.45979381443 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 8.71597938144 167% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 41.2886597938 233% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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