Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside.To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside.

To what extent do you agree or disagree

Communication network is the backbone of country to travel at national and international level. There is different mode of transport land ways, water ways and air ways to reduce the travel time. People and goods are travel from long distances towards their destination by the vehicle. Few people, they have their own opinion about solution of traffic and transportation issues. It would be adopted some strategies to overcome traffic problems and emphasis public to live in metropolitan city preference of outskirts.
However, traffic issues are increased day by day in mega cities. Traffic congestion problems have been occurred rapidly since 1998 in large populated areas of Japan.consequentlly, people are facing difficulties in daily routine to travel work place specially in peak hours. Roads are constructed by private companies, during construction it should be duty of management to located check and balance of design work. Road width must be considered according to population as well as future extension.
In addition, traffic safety elements are calculated, communication network is needed more safety.it should be designed with accurate turning points with appropriate roundabouts, proper signal system, segregation of vehicle moving lane, reduce improper U turns, fly over are constructed at thick populated areas and trained traffic police are hired. While, Private transport are controlled to promote public transport.
Therefore, Dense populated city leads to slum and squatter settlements. People are migrated towards well develop cities, some sort of employment, education and health. Migration factor is increased, it is over burden on services and crime factor are developed. the responsibility of collectively collaboration of government as well as private sectors to generate resources in the region to regulate the migration rate. Every city is planned according to population growth and adequate infrastructure.
In conclusion, alternatives are adopted to control the traffic congestion problems in urban area. It would be generated the all resources regarding socio economic in the region to discourage the migration ratio in industerlized cities.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76160990712 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14429171178 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603715170279 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.8721170335 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.388888889 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18361677189 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516791094791 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415033016005 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938544631295 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030789860692 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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