You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school.
Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter:
• say what job you have applied for
• explain why you want this job
• suggest what information the teacher should include
Dear Ms Saima
I hope you have been well. Respected madam, iam a former student of yours. iam writing to request you for an academic reference letter to be submitted along with my job application form, I have applied for the position of teaching at Preston university as a faculty member.
This opportunity is initial step of my career, which leads to attain me a successful professional life. I had been wanting teaching job at university level since my childhood, and iam highly delighted that dream come true.
Therefore, my graduation time period was four years, I had performed academic exertion and participated as volunteer in different charity functions.it is humble request to you include my all academic performance and professional skills, during my university time. As well as make a part of mandatory virtues, which you were impressed most.
Many thanks in advance for your time and support.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
Erum Jahangir
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ms Saima I hope you have been well. Respected mad...
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Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Iam
...d madam, iam a former student of yours. iam writing to request you for an academic ...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e a successful professional life. I had been wanting teaching job at university level since ...
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Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom you. Your sincerely, Erum Jahangir
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15625 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88389249756 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69375 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0742870367 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287735508364 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106789976946 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867857698619 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153746935006 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09001029946 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.