You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter:
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student of 1st year pre-engineering section. I have come from rural area to this mega city for the first time and alone. I could not stay at any rental house due to affordability issues. I opted for the hostel accommodation because of its safe surroundings and also for my ample space requirement for study. The hostel management allotted me a room with a commerce student and I am living with her for the last three months.
We have minimal interaction because of our different study schedules. I have morning classes and she has evening classes. Due to the difference of timing of our studies, I am disturbed a lot during my study during night hours. At that time, she starts mischief. She has good company of friends. She calls them, at night time, to the room, make fun, play computer games and creates unwanted noises. Due to this all, I can’t properly concentrate on my studies, which has resulted in my getting low marks in midterm examination.
Due to these reasons, I want to have a separate room, where I would be able to study properly without any disturbance from my room cohabiters. I would be able to improve my major subjects’ task, meet the deadlines of my assignments and concentrate on my weak points. This will help me to retain the same successful position as I was in the past.
I am looking forward for a positive response from you, Sir.
Yours sincerely
Iram Jahangir
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ntal house due to affordability issues. I opted for the hostel accommodation beca...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse from you, Sir. Yours sincerely Iram Jahangir
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73705179283 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83583631189 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4015033012 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9411764706 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.47058823529 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108064997112 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329687088096 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373291470202 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652793072175 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311860964972 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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