Write a letter to the local planning committee. A new swimming pool is about to be built in your town, the local planning committee wants all residents to let them know where to place the pool - in the centre of town or just outside the town. Write a lett

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the local planning committee. A new swimming pool is about to be built in your town, the local planning committee wants all residents to let them know where to place the pool - in the centre of town or just outside the town. Write a letter describing

• the importance of the pool

• the location you prefer and why

• Explain why the other location isn’t suitable.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am an inhabitant of Valencia City. Last day, while reading the newspaper, my eyes captured an article about the proposal to build new swimming pool in my town as well as we are highly privileged to offer the right opinion

Our town is well equipped with facilities for different activities but it lacks a swimming pool. The people use the river flowing through our city for swimming. However, during rainy seasons swimming in the river becomes challenging and risky. To overcome the burden, building a swimming pool is essential.

The finest site for the swimming pool construction is the space located next to the indoor stadium in our town. As a swimming enthusiast I recommend this place in view of the fact that, build an <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">an indoor swimming pool by </span>modifying the indoor sports area which provides ample space and privacy irrespective of the age and gender. Moreover, the construction will be economical and possible.

There are plenty of locations available, still the above mentioned areas is the best suited since apartments, shops, vehicles and ongoing constructions <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">in other locations</span> which could cause disturbances for the people.

Hence, it is my pleasure to provide the right suggestions for the new swimming pool.

Yours faithfully,

Sd-/

Name.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 295, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ing pool by modifying the indoor sports area which provides ample space and pri...
^^^^^^
Line 23, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew swimming pool. Yours faithfully, Sd-/ Name.
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66197183099 4.54256449028 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51281648446 2.54303337028 138% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.1170950386 44.8134815571 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.636363636 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163368534213 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627611513392 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592679538253 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927022106562 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466995458145 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 8.71597938144 178% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.