Write a letter to the manager of a company which is based in a foreign country to recommend your family member for a suitable job.
In your letter,
• Introduce yourself and say what you are doing
• Describe the role your family member is interested in
• Explain why he or she is suitable for the job
Dear Sir,
I recently came across an advertisement posted in the Montreal magazine by your esteemed organization for a vacancy of a software developer and I am writing to recommend my sibling for the role.
As a software developer myself, I am currently employed at Amazon in the UK for the past two years. I have worked on numerous projects and developed several user-based applications one of which is scheduled to release this month-end. During my projects, my brother Mr. Allwin Dsouza has shown great interest and has pitched multiple interesting ideas.
His commendable creativity can be channelized in developing state-of-the-art software products as he too is a Computer Science Engineer. As a keen candidate, he has engaged himself in three projects as a freelancer and is exercising his knowledge. Recently graduating with his bachelor’s degree, Allwin has been applying for jobs specifically in the province of Montreal.
During his final year of Engineering, he was entitled to the best application developer for the recommendation system for commuting within the region of Britain. Along with technical skills, he possesses various soft skills like reporting, documenting, and even presenting skills. Personally, I would recommend him for a junior software developer as he may pose as an asset to your organization.
I have attached his resume to this letter and I would be grateful if you consider this letter of recommendation. Thank you and hope to hear from you soon.
Faithfully yours,
Adlen DSouza
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35950413223 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24459115517 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632231404959 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8891511917 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7692307692 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 4.34317383033 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148943785185 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470799439775 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448141853679 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855044142267 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436850623459 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 41.2886597938 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.