Though healthcare professional suggest that the mid-age group citizens must perform a few exercises on a daily basis for good health and well-being, many still suffer from an exercise deficit routine. The cause for this, seem to lie in the lack of awareness and time-management; both of which will be discussed in this essay.
With the dawn of health awareness in the recent times, most of the people who could have benefited with an early livelihood change, are in their late 50’s having no knowledge with regards to workout. This age group are found to be in a limbo when suggested to perform the simplest of routines, as they do not know where to begin from. A recent poll conducted by the Health and Wellness Group, reported that a majority of the citizens belonging to age group 40 to 70 do not know the difference between cardio and resistance exercises; showing a lack of awareness. Another reason is the lack of personal time as they are the breadwinners for their household, and spend most of their time managing family matters instead of making time for themselves. Due to this choice of time-management, most of the older people suffer from a short of fitness, leading to health issues. To illustrate, an interview with working couples in the city of Beijing admitted that they simply do not have time for any workout.
However, with the help of certain guidance and support, these issues can be irradicated. Setting up multiple awareness camps in a regular interval, have proven to shown huge developments in the health and wellbeing of a third of New York’s population, reported the World Health Organization. Likewise, such awareness, could be imparted in many places globally to reduce the suffrage of poor health and workout deficit routines. Secondly, family members can contribute to the household chores and divide work equally, such that every family member receives the free time that they are entitled to. In an exclusive interview with local students of Brazil, scheduling of work by creating a rota for the members of a household, parents are able to find time for themselves to read, listen to music and to even perform circuit trainings.
In conclusion, it is highly likely for the health and wellness of mid age group people to be affected by lack of awareness and time-management, however, with regular campaign for awareness and support by family members in order to make time, they can reverse such consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested performing'.
Suggestion: suggested performing
...e group are found to be in a limbo when suggested to perform the simplest of routines, as they do no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, still, third, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98053527981 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80112177061 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518248175182 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5983309333 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.214285714 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3571428571 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209452740271 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082414369873 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625007564178 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152045119694 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669810386485 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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