Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter
explain why you do not like the current programs
describe what kind of programs you would like to see instead
explain why these programs are better
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express how disinterested I feel when I watch the current shows on your prestigious media channel. Personally speaking, I don't get entertained by the typical daily soaps which as they are not at all interesting anymore, additionally they are so similar to each other, which brings nothing exciting.
Can you broadcast a few reality shows on your channel? For instance, TV series like BigBoss, American war, Masterchef, Fear factor etc. are loved by me and at present, they are only available on web-based streaming services. Moreover, reality shows create a buzz and are often discussed between me and my friends.
Let me explain, you that why Reality shows are so popular amongst the youth, in general, these programs are attractive and fascinating as they create curiosity because of that X factor in them. Furthermore, real-life based shows give the viewers a chance to connect with the participants and consequently, the audience feel a strong connection too. Thus, adding reality TV series to the catalog will be successful for your channel and a delight for the viewers too.
Yours faithfully,
Abhishek Saxena
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, i feel, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87683786042 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677248677249 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1642737184 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126120325962 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046773003641 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508155495862 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747455318896 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178008593266 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.