Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do Begin your letter as follows Dear Sir or Madam

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
• describe the item you lost
• explain how you lost it
• tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to make an insurance claim under the terms and conditions of my travel insurance policy (#123456). On the recent holiday in Japan, I lost a valuable ring as a result of urgent evacuation from the hotel caused by the earthquake.

The cost of the ring, as stated in the insurance agreement, is $900. This was a thin golden ring, with a snake engraved around and a sapphire, which I did not find upon return to the hotel. I searched carefully the floor and the nightstand on which it was left. Contact details of the hotel are attached to this letter as well as other information which you might need to settle this claim.

I kindly ask you to respond to my request within 20 days in accordance with your policy. Should you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you and thank you in advance for your help.

Yours faithfully,
Ivan Ivanov (Mr)

Votes
Average: 8.1 (4 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, well, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50887573964 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44300602161 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656804733728 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2398821338 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279991214755 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899444100898 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660718368593 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139110928042 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605685539161 0.0580467560999 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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