Respected Sir/Madam,
I am a resident of Green Avenue Society and writing this letter to raise a conern related to the pets which are provoked by their young owners for fun sake and other people's lives are put on stake. Mostly, old age residents walk or children use to play in the park besides the building where the incident happens.
It started almost from the last week that some boys from our society started playing with the dogs which was quite okay for everyone but eventually they started racing the dogs by hitting them with sticks to get on the top of the race so that they could win the betting amount. The dogs became so annoyed that 4 people including children were bitten by them and suffered a lot. After that, the neighbours confronted them and told them to stop creating such dangerous situation again but failed as it continued even after.
So it is a request to you to take appropriate action against them as no one wants to spoil the future of those youngsters, however it is necessary to teach them a lesson that their callous attitude can be put to a halt.
I look forward for a positive response from your side and a strict action as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Rinki Gupta
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...tly, old age residents walk or children use to play in the park besides the buildin...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61926605505 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33293299999 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665137614679 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.1215558388 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.875 76.5299724578 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103448833035 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342479369812 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335236702796 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0378577013851 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383586113404 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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