Write a letter to the Mayor, the head of a municipal government, complaining about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing danger.
Dear Sir,
I am John, member of the Civil-Zone community. I am writing you to see if any action be taken towards the issue with walking dogs in our locality.
The challenge is that, some adolescents in our neighborhood let their dogs run wildly on road. They do not even care about people walking on road and leave the dogs and are more interested in peeping into their mobile. Moreover, it is creating problem to the kids playing outside and senior citizens going for their walk. These dogs are perilous to everyone if such dogs attack them.
I have already informed about the consequences of these furious attacks several times and to keep a dog muzzle at least so that all are saved to some extent. But, there is no action taken towards this. Furthermore, many dogs in our area are ferocious and bark at everyone. For instance, when one of the kid playing in the ground is bitten by a dog badly and others who tried to stop this were also injured.
So, I ask you to consider and act on this so that we can prevent undergoing this sort of dangerous situations. Even a small dog can injure severely and this is hazardous.So, I hope this request is not procrastinated.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
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Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rocrastinated. Yours sincerely, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, at least, for instance, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63255813953 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57506451845 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5040323622 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6153846154 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180197123549 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611760021294 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776466113934 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986830081812 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771583809337 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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